Step 1: Read the following articles

Commentary – The Effects of Inflammation, Aging, and Oxidative Stress on the Pathogenesis of Type II Diabetes

Review article -The effects of inflammation, aging and oxidative stress on the pathogenesis of diabetes mellitus

 

Step 2: Edit the Commentary – The Effects of Inflammation, Aging, and Oxidative Stress on the Pathogenesis of Type II Diabetes based on the feed backs

Basically the feed backs are:

  • Table 1 – explain in more details; around 100 – 150 words; use new references if necessary
  • Figure 1 – make sure that reference used is correct; explain Figure 1 in more details in around 100-150 words; use new references if necessary
  • Make the necessary amendments to the abstract and conclusion after adding new details to table 1 and figure 1 respectively

 

Commentary editing